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Post by foxtrot813 on Dec 7, 2012 12:06:26 GMT -5
!Warning!: It is not for those that are offended by cursing and blood. Disclaimer: I feel that the language and violence in this story are necessary in order to build the atmosphere, thus I will not remove or censer it unless directly asked by an Admin. This was written by odairu17 and revised by me.
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Post by foxtrot813 on Dec 7, 2012 12:13:49 GMT -5
This is a work in progress and feedback is appreciated. Attachments:
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Itachi
Newbie
well.....that was interesting.....
Posts: 232
Favorite Movie/TV Series?: Hellraiser
Favorite Country?: Russia!!!! ^.^
Favorite Book/Manga?: The Forgotten Realms series
Favorite Genre?: horror
Favorite Character?: Drizzt Do'Urden
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Post by Itachi on Dec 10, 2012 13:19:05 GMT -5
Hmm...so far it sounds very well put together. Great description thus far. Maybe a bit more dialog, but all in all it is good!
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Post by Lil Miss Angie on Mar 1, 2013 9:28:43 GMT -5
Can't wait to read more. Good overall plotline but it could use a bit more descriptive words so we can feel like we are actually there but other then that good job.
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